Educators, parents, and students often ask, "What does good student writing at this grade level look like?" The answer lies in the writing itself. All students can meet high standards. The Massachusetts Curriculum Frameworks outline content and skill expectations at each grade level. Below are examples of high-quality student writing with annotations that highlight how each piece meets or exceeds learning standards at its grade level. The annotated samples are designed to support teachers, administrators, families, and students in improving instruction and student writing.
The student writing samples below represent a range of grade levels and content areas and were written for a variety of tasks, audiences, and purposes. When possible, they include information about the assignment and teaching strategies that elicited the writing. Writers come from Massachusetts public schools in urban, suburban, and rural districts across the state.
All samples are authentic and unedited student work. Accordingly, they may contain inaccuracies in wording and content or shortcomings in the use of standard English conventions. Samples were submitted by teachers and administrators for review and selection by panels of Massachusetts educators with expertise in writing instruction and evaluation.
Please note that samples were collected and annotated before the 2018 revisions to the Massachusetts standards for history and social science.
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Kindergarten Opinion — Harry
Kindergarten Opinion Sample — Harry
Kindergarten Inform/Explain — How to Play Football
Kindergarten Inform/Explain Sample — How to Play Football
Kindergarten Narrate — Auntie and Me
Kindergarten Narrate Sample — Auntie and Me
Kindergarten Narrate — When I Went to the Aquarium
Kindergarten Narrate Sample — When I Went to the Aquarium
Grade 1 Opinion — Panara Bread
Grade 1 Opinion Sample — Panara Bread
Grade 1 Opinion — Legos
Grade 1 Opinion Sample — Legos
Grade 1 Inform/Explain — Weather in Polar Regions
Grade 1 Inform/Explain Sample — Weather in the Polar Regions
Grade 1 Narrate — From the Heart
Grade 1 Narrate Sample — From the Heart
Grade 2 Opinion/Argument — Everyone Should Go to All About Birds.com
Grade 2 Opinion/Argument Sample — Everyone Should Go to All About Birds.com
Grade 2 Inform/Explain — All About the Grey Wolf: The Pack Family (Selection 1)
Grade 2 Inform/Explain Sample — All About the Grey Wolf: The Pack Family (Selection 1)
Grade 2 Inform/Explain — All About the Grey Wolf: Howl In The Night (Selection 2)
Grade 2 Inform/Explain Sample — All About the Grey Wolf: Howl In The Night (Selection 2)
Grade 2 Narrate — Good Bye to Winter Clothes
Grade 2 Narrate Sample — Good Bye to Winter Clothes
Grade 2 Narrate — Skiing
Grade 2 Narrate Sample — Skiing
Grade 3 Opinion — Keep Endangered Animals Safe
Grade 3 Opinion Sample — Keep Endangered Animals Safe
Grade 3 Inform/Explain — The Fort
Grade 3 Inform/Explain Sample — The Fort
Grade 3 Inform/Explain — Visions of Helen Adams Keller
Grade 3 Inform/Explain Sample — Visions of Helen Adams Keller
Grade 3 Inform/Narrate — Hello
Grade 3 Inform/Narrate Sample — Hello
Grade 3 Narrate — Run Away Rachel
Grade 3 Narrate Sample — Run Away Rachel
Grade 4 Opinion/Argument — Outdoor Recess…Required!
Grade4 Opinion/Argument Sample — Outdoor Recess…Required!
Grade 4 Inform/Explain — Living with Asperger's Syndrome
Grade 4 Inform/Explain Sample — Living with Asperger's Syndrome
Grade 4 Narrate — The Comeback
Grade 4 Narrate Sample — The Comeback
Grade 5 Opinion/Argument — Be Careful When You Let Your Dog Off Leash
Grade 5 Opinion/Argument Sample — Be Careful When You Let Your Dog Off Leash
Grade 5 Inform/Explain — Hot Air Balloons
Grade 5 Inform/Explain Sample — Hot Air Balloons
Grade 5 Inform/Explain — Pointe Shoes
Grade 5 Inform/Explain Sample — Pointe Shoes
Grade 5 Inform/Explain — Malala Yousafzai
Grade 5 Inform/Explain Sample — Malala Yousafzai
Grade 5 Narrate — King-Da-Ka
Grade 5 Narrate Sample — King-Da-Ka
Grade 5 Narrate — The Rose
Grade 5 Narrate Sample — The Rose
Grade 6 Opinion/Argument — Dear Mr. Sandler
Grade 6 Opinion/Argument Sample — Dear Mr. Sandler
Grade 6 Opinion/Argument — Pros and Cons of Technology
Grade 6 Opinion/Argument Sample — Pros and Cons of Technology
Grade 6 Opinion/Argument — Dear Mr. Spinelli
Grade 6 Opinion/Argument Sample — Dear Mr. Spinelli
Grade 6 Inform/Explain — The Salem Witch Trials
Grade 6 Inform/Explain Sample — The Salem Witch Trials
Grade 6 Narrate — Sailing
Grade 6 Narrate Sample — Sailing
Grade 6 Narrate — Feelings of Fall
Grade 6 Narrate Sample — Feelings of Fall
Grade 7 Opinion/Argument — Animal Rights: Give Them a Voice
Grade 7 Opinion/Argument Sample — Animal Rights: Give Them a Voice
Grade 7 Inform/Explain — The Monsters Are Due on Maple Street
Grade 7 Inform/Explain Sample — The Monsters are Due on Maple Street
Grade 7 Narrate — The Great Escape—From The Amazing Adventures of Bunny Foo Foo
Grade 7 Narrate Sample — The Great Escape—From The Amazing Adventures of Bunny Foo Foo
Grade 7 Narrate — The Tale of a Leaf
Grade7 Narrate Sample — The Tale of a Leaf
Grade 8 Opinion/Argument & Narrate — Literary Interpretation
Grade 8 Opinion/Argument & Narrate Sample — Literary Interpretation
Grade 8 Opinion/Argument — Many Faiths (Version 1)
Grade 8 Opinion/Argument Sample — Many Faiths (Version 1)
Grade 8 Opinion/Argument — Many Faiths (Version 2)
Grade 8 Opinion/Argument Sample — Many Faiths (Version 2)
Grade 8 Inform/Explain — Dear Ms. Cynthia Lord
Grade 8 Inform/Explain Sample — Dear Ms. Cynthia Lord
Grade 8 Narrate — Lab Rat
Grade 8 Narrate Sample — Lab Rat
Grade 8 Narrate — Before on Stone
Grade 8 Narrate Sample … Before on Stone
Grade 8 Narrate — Wonder
Grade 8 Narrate Sample — Wonder
Grade 9 Inform/Explain — Growth in Spirit
Grade 9 Inform/Explain Sample — Growth in Spirit
Grade 10 Blend of Inform/Explain and Narrate — Thunder
Grade 10 Blend of Inform/Explain and Narrate Sample — Thunder
Grade 10 Narrate — I Am
Grade 10 Narrate Sample — I Am
Grade 10 Inform/Explain — High School Artists
Grade 10 Inform/Explain Sample — High School Artists
Grade 11 Narrate — Math
Grade 11 Narrate Sample — Math
Grade 12 Narrate — The Hidden Places
Grade 12 Narrate Sample — The Hidden Places
Last Updated: November 20, 2019
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